After reviewing the feedback on your argument essay, identify one thing you did well and one area you need to improve. Explain what you will do differently the next time you write an AP Lang argument essay.

 prompt -After reviewing the feedback on my argument essay, I successfully developed a clear, defensible thesis that established a strong line of reasoning throughout my response. However, an area where I need to improve is integrating specific, concrete evidence rather than relying on broad generalizations to support my claims. The next time I write an AP Lang argument essay, I will spend the first few minutes brainstorming diverse examples from history, current events, or literature and ensure each body paragraph explicitly connects that evidence back to my central thesis.

summary-absent

reflection-absent

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Describe one thing that makes you different from other people.

  Prompt Response:  One thing that makes me different from other people is my personality.I am outgoing and I enjoy making people laugh and feel comfortable.I can be a shy person but when I'm with people I'm comfortable with I be laughing at my own jokes.My creativity helps me think of different ideas and solve problems in my own way.I have my own interest and goals that make me unique.Like for example my goal is to travel the world and invest money on companies so that I can make more money and then be a dentist.The main thing that makes me different from others is my personality. Summary:Today in class we watched clips of movies and identified the rethorical choice they used most effectively. Reflection:   I learned how to tell on clips the rethorical choice they used because it can seem like is pathos because it might show emotion to us but it mostly how the audience feels or it they were moved by emotion.I can use this so I can prove my point in an argument .
Read more

What is the most creative thing you have ever made? Share what it was and explain why it stands out as your best work.

  Prompt Response:  The most creative thing I have ever made is a set of custom lash extensions.I started learning how to do lashes because I wanted to create something that showed my skills and creativity.I enjoyed using different lengths and styles to create a look that was unique.I had to be patient and pay attention while working on each lash.at first it was challenging because it was hard to stick the lashes but after practicing every day I become good and confident.The experience showed me that it takes patience even to be creative so it can come out good. Summary: Today in class we learned about SPACECAT which is just about the speaker, purpose,audience,context,exigence,choices,appeals,tone. Reflection: I learned how to identify SPACECAT in a text or video just by what the speaker Is saying.This will help me because I can agree or disagree with the speaker and to identify the importance.
Read more

Three things I want to accomplish this year

I want to accomplish three goals this year.First, I want to have all straight A's by staying organized,completing all my assignments on time,and studying for test and quizzes.Second, I want to become more involved in school by joining clubs and doing community service hours for the school.Lastly, I want to manage my time more wisely so I can stay on track of my school work and my responsibilities out of school. These goals will help me become better as a student and person.
Read more