Working with others can expose you to ideas or perspectives you may not have considered on your own. What is one idea, suggestion, or approach from a group member that improved your paragraph or changed the way you thought about the argument? Explain how it helped you.

 Prompt response-One idea from a group member that improved my paragraph was adding more explanation to my evidence.They suggested that I explain why the evidence supported my claim instead of including evidence.They helped make my argument clearer and stronger because I was able to show connection between my evidence and my main point.It also changed the way I thought about writing arguments because I realized that explaining my evidence it as important as finding good evidence.

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